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1) You have a severe restating problem that, if fixed, I believe it could improve your writing tenfold. For example: Love is powerful. It’s a happiness far beyond any other, ...

We are on the window lattice, holding throbbing hearts in our hands. Moonlight-painted faces, as cold as dreams twenty two thousand leages out of reach - Adam and Eve revelation; ...

Why Jason?

I bump. And I am unashamed

Be nice, Brad. Princess Pettie - sorry to back the sour side, but this is relatively often heard. I would favor some original imagery or some-such. For example, the description ...

Its Always and Forever All of the "it's" need apostrophes. Its a life time experience Its now or its never Its hard to convince. Its a one way road Its ...

Very simple language for you. I'm no fan of lists either. (I'm aware I'm useless)

blood on a dandelion, the petals peel and shiver down into solitary winter - where even the beautiful freeze to be time-tapped and sapped of syrup and libido. Lips push ...

Chapter 15 --- I'm turning 15. Hahah

and I could sort of tell from the brush you gave your shoulder that this was only temporary Unclear

Pathetic on the cushions; I burn a hole into the rug and you, simply sinking deeper in quicksand security. Deathtrap: I'm not bothering to grapple across the miles between us. ...

I LOVE YOU!

Snoink beat me to it.

Sorry, never had a pet. Not one for empathy.

I'm with Firestarter. In fact, I might even be worse. Gummy is the one that writes, then Sara-Bara parties while plain, old Sara stays home and pulls "A"s in academics ...